pratice, drink your milk, take your vitamins.

try adding a bit more contrast between the lights and darks. nicely done on the shape of the eyebrows the angle on the dress on the left seems to be a bit off.

You should spend more time on it, using a grill to find the right proportions The shading can be improved : it's too light in some parts, too dark on the cheek. Take your time, you have potential
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im sure diane meant grid, or maybe she did mean grill. you dont need one really, it just makes me even more confused when i try to use one. just look at your source, compare.

Thanks for your criticism. My problem is to be seen with the shade it and converted it. Have you perhaps any tips?


Sorry for my english I has it always translated of a translation program.

The eyelashes are pretty scary Bro. It looks better if they are closer together and a little fuller. For the hair, you could try a wider pencil, or use the side of one to make clumps, and then add the details instead of drawing one at a time, that takes forever, and it usually doesn't look as good. Keep going though, we all need practice. Grid drawing is cool, and also sketch all the time, don't worry about what you sketch, just how you use the pencil. What feels comfortable to you, and so on.

It will be interesting to watch your development. There is most certainly potential here. I just hope arenhaus doesn't see it as he tends to have an unmotivating side to his criticisms.

Concentrate on perfecting one item at a time. Practice drawing lips, and then eyes and noses (not necessarily in that oder). Noses are tough. It'll come before you know it. My drawings are by no means perfect but take a look at the eyes in the sketch I uploaded (called in your face). Its rough but its a good closeup to serve as an example. Don't worry about the rest of the pic. The point of the exercise when I drew it was eye practice. Eyes can change a picture immensely.

It can help to look a other techniques to get ideas, but learning by trial and error allows you to develop your own technique based on what you see working when you draw and how you interpret it. Learning from books turns you into a clone of another artist. Art is about your expression and seeing how it evolves and devlops with each picture, so keep up the good work.

Thanks @ll for your Criticsms.

You should post your work first in thr sketch tread in the forum so people can give you some advice before you publish..
Be constructive in your drawing, draw a 'frame' of sketchy lines to make sure the eyes, mouth etc are at the right place before you go shading.
Keep it up!

i agree to diane